Was it necessary to use my name? :`(
The beginning was a bit slow, the rest was pretty nice :D
Though the frames went by too fast in my opinion, didn't have time to read everything and see everything.
Lmao i never used your name at all. It's an action script trick that gets everyones names right when there logged into there newgrounds account.
Don't worry it's a harmless acton script trick to fool you into thinking i made this for you and you only.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Funny, but needs improvement.
I thought the story was funny, some of the animations were well done though not all. The cutting and timing of scenes was great, good job on that part.
One of the biggest flaws is sound-wise. Some of the sounds (Like with the wall-fortification) were very low quality and too "sound box". The music was great, and the one at the beginning fit the animation, but the rest of the movie was too quiet. Even a very silent background music can help and so can other sounds (edited to sound better).
Graphically, try to improve the drawings. Maybe use the line tool or add colors. Register hair with he head so you won't have to redraw it everytime.
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